Good job on that title screen, the moon is really striking. Default sound volume is a bit high. The opening sequence with the eyes is cool. As for the script, the infodumps about the settings peppered in Runa’s dialogues are not very natural, but totally understandable considering this is a jam game. Considering you use both NVL and ADV textboxes, the descriptions the characters are unlikely to voice out could be in the NVL mode.
MyCasket, though :cry: What a name for a grocery store. I kinda expect the game to end after the charm is returned. That would be kind of eerie (also nice that it still works even after we know what the twist is…right on the title!). Minimalist, atmospheric ambience works very well here.
I’ll admit I have a bit of a mood whiplash but the “today is the 25th” joke and the sudden chibi sprites got me to laugh. Ok the stream ending is a nice one. Not what I expected but a nice one. The pan up to the moon before closing is a nice touch. I’ll see how this goes as you finetune the details!
Thank you so much for the feedback! I really appreciate hearing feedback for the script as this is my first time writing, I'll keep these points in mind for coming update and future projects~!
I may or may not have switched out a letter on an actual store's name xD I'm glad you noticed! Haha yeah basically like recent anime titles that explain everything in the title, still made sure to still incorporate some surprise to the story.
I'm really glad to hear it made you laugh, that's honestly the best! Appreciate the feedback so much! Much love~!
I've been looking forward to playing this since some of the CGs were posted on the Light.vn server, and it didn't disappoint at all! When I saw it was in early access, I wasn't at all expecting it to have such a complete story, so that was a really nice surprise. I really like the art in general, especially Runa's design (her star hair pin is such a cute detail for her being a space research student) and the cuter elements, like the key chain and the dog. No spoilers, but the motivations of the landlord really was fun and interesting. The gecko (and the information when you close the game on it) was really great, too! I really look forward to seeing how this project progresses and what else you make!
Oh thank you so much! I really appreciate the feedback TT and I'm so happy you enjoyed the story! It's cool that you noticed such details as the star hair pin (even I forgot it at times haha). and I hope you'll like the details I'll add as I'll finetune and render the art out more for the coming update(s)! Much love and thanks for the support!
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Good job on that title screen, the moon is really striking. Default sound volume is a bit high. The opening sequence with the eyes is cool. As for the script, the infodumps about the settings peppered in Runa’s dialogues are not very natural, but totally understandable considering this is a jam game. Considering you use both NVL and ADV textboxes, the descriptions the characters are unlikely to voice out could be in the NVL mode.
MyCasket, though :cry: What a name for a grocery store. I kinda expect the game to end after the charm is returned. That would be kind of eerie (also nice that it still works even after we know what the twist is…right on the title!). Minimalist, atmospheric ambience works very well here.
I’ll admit I have a bit of a mood whiplash but the “today is the 25th” joke and the sudden chibi sprites got me to laugh. Ok the stream ending is a nice one. Not what I expected but a nice one. The pan up to the moon before closing is a nice touch. I’ll see how this goes as you finetune the details!
Thank you so much for the feedback! I really appreciate hearing feedback for the script as this is my first time writing, I'll keep these points in mind for coming update and future projects~!
I may or may not have switched out a letter on an actual store's name xD I'm glad you noticed!
Haha yeah basically like recent anime titles that explain everything in the title, still made sure to still incorporate some surprise to the story.
I'm really glad to hear it made you laugh, that's honestly the best!
Appreciate the feedback so much! Much love~!
I've been looking forward to playing this since some of the CGs were posted on the Light.vn server, and it didn't disappoint at all! When I saw it was in early access, I wasn't at all expecting it to have such a complete story, so that was a really nice surprise. I really like the art in general, especially Runa's design (her star hair pin is such a cute detail for her being a space research student) and the cuter elements, like the key chain and the dog. No spoilers, but the motivations of the landlord really was fun and interesting. The gecko (and the information when you close the game on it) was really great, too! I really look forward to seeing how this project progresses and what else you make!
Oh thank you so much! I really appreciate the feedback TT and I'm so happy you enjoyed the story! It's cool that you noticed such details as the star hair pin (even I forgot it at times haha). and I hope you'll like the details I'll add as I'll finetune and render the art out more for the coming update(s)! Much love and thanks for the support!